24h購物| | PChome| 登入
2009-06-29 17:08:23| 人氣199| 回應1 | 上一篇 | 下一篇

Flying Kite

推薦 0 收藏 0 轉貼0 訂閱站台

這是很久之前曾經聽過的一個真實故事,故事裏的男孩女孩是誰,已
不復記憶,只剩模糊的印象,也不重要,重要的是,我還依稀記得這
個故事裏、敘述中,男孩字裏行間所透露出的悲傷,是以將之轉為英
詩,將自己曾有過的感動,記錄下來。

此詩約莫完成於半年前,且看是否能有所回應。

Flying Kite

You are a kite in the sky
I am a child on another side
leasing the rein
Rolling the line
Running in the wild
hope to keep you high
reach the boundless height
free and wide.

You fly high
over the sky.
enjoy the beautiful sight.

I feel tired
under the sky
wait till your sight.

But time rolls by
you still hide
in the fathomless high.

Suddenly, seemingly,
something jumps to my mind
breeze blow in my side
whisper to give me guide
"The kite" he gently cite
"may not come back to thy
for she's gone too high
out of you sight"

Shockingly I rise
surprised to find
like lighting from the sky
hit me right
"Where is your sight ? "
Just to realize
as the wind cite.
Oh, no
I lost your sight.

I panic to pull the line
Hope you can reach my sight
but line is tight
feeling not right
forces down the line
comes resistance and fight

Have you lost your mind ?
I yelled as wild.
Why do we have to fight ?
you respond nothing right.

Therefore I can only sigh,
Gazing the sky
trace where you fly(fluw by)
hope to find
something you left behind

I try and try
nothing can I find.
Dispair grows inside.
Losses cover my mind.
Silence become my sign.
retreat to a lonely night.

I am torn and tired,
broken in the sadden night.
To let you fly,
I have to run wild,
Push you to the sky.

However you just leave right,
put me behind
out of your mind.

When is the time,
you become so unkind ?
Is the fly changing your mind?
Or is the sight alters your kind ?

I lament to thy 
over the grieve I cite.
Can't you sympathize mine?
For we have been a long time.

Still nothing you reply
My echo is the only sign
Ripple through the sky
but never reach thy.

Till this time
Nothing seems right.
Is this time
the right time ?
should I decide
to let go
or hold you tight ?

 

台長: 火狐
人氣(199) | 回應(1)| 推薦 (0)| 收藏 (0)| 轉寄
全站分類: 圖文創作(詩詞、散文、小說、懷舊、插畫) | 個人分類: 自創英詩 |
此分類下一篇:Fate

若隱
讓我想起了陳昇的"風箏"

因為我知道你是個
容易擔心的小孩子
所以我在飛翔的時候
卻也不敢飛得太遠
就算我偶爾飛飛翔到雲間
我希望你能看得見
就算我偶爾會貪玩迷了路
也知道你在等著我
我是一個貪玩又自由的風箏
每天都會讓你擔憂
如果有一天迷失風中
要如何回到你身邊
因為我知道你是個
容易擔心的小孩子
所以我在飛翔的時候
卻也不敢飛得太遠
我是一個貪玩又自由的風箏
每天都會讓你擔憂
如果有一天迷失風中
要如何回到你身邊
貪玩又自由的風箏
每天都遊戲在天空
如果有一天扯斷了線
你是否會回來尋找我
如果有一天迷失風中
帶我回到你的懷中
因為我知道你是個
容易擔心的小孩子
所以我在飛翔的時候
卻也不敢飛得太遠

在天空那頭的有風的牽引.
在線另一頭的只有止不住的擔心.
兩端間的線是對彼此的信心..
一旦任何一方信心動搖了...
線...離斷的那天就不遠了..
2010-11-20 11:36:55
版主回應
不同的處境,倒反的心情,陳昇的風箏,看來跟我這首詩描述的心情,是類似鏡射的差相彷彿。
2010-11-21 00:07:49
是 (若未登入"個人新聞台帳號"則看不到回覆唷!)
* 請輸入識別碼:
請輸入圖片中算式的結果(可能為0) 
(有*為必填)
TOP
詳全文