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〈感慨篇二十韻〉

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各位同學可不要以為台長打混,隨便拿周小生的詩貼一貼就應卯。用這個笨注音系統打不常用詞不但困難,還要查難檢字表耶!

好啦!我知道要請創作者來講自己的詩是很殘忍的事:寫的時候靈魂剝了一層皮,解說又要赤裸一次。所以我決定先把詩擺著,讓大家細心體會。假如我們寒假還會開同學會,我就會拿錄音機專訪周小生,到時候再回頭來寫補述。(很專業吧?!)現在先幫大家(其實是我自己)把可能的生字查出來,先享受一下周新庠同學的詩。


瞧!我們有這樣的同學,是不是覺得很驕傲呢?呵呵呵呵!
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感慨篇二十韻

周新庠

相憐愛許杜子美,不計自身僭舌巧。
三五年來三五誦,事到慬免君自瞭。
意在滄桑句便工,所幸漂離仍草草。
獨夜艱難合墨吞,一賦吟成天亦老。
凍窗弔影豈丁伶,淒厲風魂山鬼愀。
涅面魍魎哭修羅,蓬頭鍾馗長指爪。
奪志俊醪冷釅茶,共濟咸池決昏曉。
六龍委我潛波逝,我溺猶耽心枯槁。
殘命更値大司命,危冠豐頰疑沖小。
噤聲威儀下上台,啟齒澒然破冥渺。
詰問尚可擔斯文,且質膂力能多少。
已稍寬假當歸去,黃鶴載入白雲杳。
水殤彭賢與靈均,孟郊憔悴瘦賈島。
澆薄廛塵常顑頷,鮑照兵死張藉眇。
區區何曾懼寂寥,馮唐歲睌清無擾。
偶排哀愴寄重霄,音節苦澀澈幽窅。
江淹痛失五色筆,狂夫但隨葛洪狡!
詩名未必交永壽,會須令聞託耋耄?
從今四海為家日,靜聽颼颼看飛鳥。
浣花溪畔對逸翁,將酒續命終湖沼。

(㊣ 本詩版權為周新庠所有,請勿任意轉載。)



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註:
1.【釅】一ㄢˋ
味道濃厚。宋.蘇軾.正月二十日與潘郭二生出郊尋春忽
 記去年是日同至女王城作詩乃和前韻:「江城白酒三杯釅
 ,野老蒼顏一笑溫。」
瞹顏色深。唐.戴叔倫.贈慧上人詩:「雲霞色釅禪房衲,
 星月光涵古殿燈。」

2. 【窅】(一)一ㄠˇ (二)ㄇ一ㄥˊ
(一)一ㄠˇ
訜遠望。文選.謝脁.敬亭山詩:「緣源殊未極,歸徑窅如
 迷。」李善.注引聲類曰:「窅,遠望也。」唐.賈至.
 巴陵早秋寄荊州崔司馬吏部閻功曹舍人詩:「曠如臨渤澥
 ,窅疑造瀛洲。」

訩幽遠、精深。莊子.知北遊:「夫道窅然難言哉,將為汝
 言其崖略!」

訫幽靜、沉寂。唐.李白.山中問答詩:「桃花流水窅然去
 ,別有天地非人間。」

(二)ㄇ一ㄥˊ
「冥」之異體。

3. 【醪】ㄌㄠˊ
混含渣滓的濁酒。說文解字:「醪,汁滓酒也。」文選.
 劉伶.酒德頌:「先生於是方捧甖承槽,銜杯漱醪。」

4. 【澒】
(一)ㄏㄨㄥˋ
覑水銀。同「汞」。淮南子.墬形:「黃埃五百歲生黃澒,
 黃澒五百歲生黃金。」高誘.注:「澒,水銀也。」
訩水深廣的樣子。文選.左思.吳都賦:「澒溶沆瀁,莫測
 其深。」
(二)ㄍㄨㄥˇ
「汞」之異體。

5.【顑】ㄎㄢˇ
顑頷:
 形容因吃不飽而面黃肌瘦的樣子。楚辭.屈原.離騷:
「苟余情其信姱以練要兮,長顑頷亦何傷。」

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新庠兄:

看到沒有,來稿真的見底了!
假如上一則 ULTIMATUM 對你沒有作用,我就要去奏請皇上發十二道金牌啦!

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順便加12面金絲膏
2007-11-23 11:15:11
S
ㄟ~~很深ㄋㄟ看嘸!
2007-11-23 16:21:21
Sid
I think this is YV`s blog, her diary of a public version. We can be faithful and religious attendees only. Our writings can only be posed through her interpretation or transformation---metamorphosis, yes, that`s the word, and a WITCH is just too much good at it!
I was thinking, though, if I can do anything to help keep the editor inspired and refreshed.
2007-11-23 20:32:16
To Sid
You guys are already doing this &quotinspiration&quot job. I mean, I am like a doll of clay and you guys &quotinspire,&quot literally and figuratively, to keep the doll breathing.
2007-11-23 23:19:55
Sid
Why are you keying so in the world?
Is red wine accompanied?
2007-11-23 23:23:32
Why?
No wine, just coffee! I am quite sober. I am just imagining that I am Adam. Haha!!
2007-11-23 23:27:42
Sid
Be it red or white wine, you properly need an adequate face-wash, with your loving family around.
2007-11-23 23:30:31
Sid
Try to return.
Is there any possibility for the lecture?
2007-11-23 23:34:43
版主回應
Not lecture, please. Talk or chitchat, maybe.

I am not sure of the schedule yet, but I am definite that I will have a five-week vacation. Hahahah!!!
2007-12-08 00:14:47
Plus
You will believe I am sober if I use the name Eve instead of Adam?! Just kidding!

Come to my sober/calmer self......
I don`t think I am willing to write about THE PENAL COLONY or THE CASTLE for the time being. I will write about Kafka`s parables. I adore them so much. They are rather poetic and &quotcrystallin.&quot
2007-11-23 23:41:08
Sid
To me, being crystallin means being poetic sometimes. I hope a cystal soul as you can understand.
2007-11-24 00:03:30
YV
Right! But maybe it is time for you to go get some rest! It`s too late, and sitting up so late and thinking of Kafka might be harmful to the liver.

Gotta go to finish my grading online. More soon. Good night!
2007-11-24 00:06:27
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