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"Sigh Not for Me"

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既然席德那麼久都沒投稿，那麼我們將他隨手胡亂寫寫的「讀者回應」刊來當正文，也許可以刺激他的產量。

（這時候席德心裡不免犯嘀咕：「魔羯傢伙每一時刻都很認真的！哪來的『隨手胡亂寫寫』」？）

(本詩原載於12/22/2007 對 Emily Dickinson 詩的回應)

Sigh Not for Me
By Sidney Chou

Sigh not for me
For I no longer see
The Gothic peak; at times I peek
The massive melancholy meek
Shadowers, among whom an ordinary me

Puppets with the best to prink
A-waiting an enlightenment to blink
Stopping at sight of the fringe
Deflected to only cringe
The saddest thing to do is prink

Prink for life, prink for thee
`Cause you, a religion to me

(㊣ 本詩版權為周新庠所有，請勿任意轉載。)
(台長覺得：一個人假如還能「吃得下、睡得著、笑得出來」，就不能濫用 sad 當情緒。還能 ”prink,” 該感恩啦！)

(還有：加了小傀儡當插圖之後，忽然覺得自己很像卡拉OK 的配圖員。這麼
literal 的插圖，比起那些莫名其妙的泳裝女郎畫面好像好不到哪兒去。看到
puppets 就放 puppets！那不然......就當我在愛現我們家的玩具吧！讓這三隻傀儡出來透透氣好了！)

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台長： Yvette

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Sid toYV
It seems that you forgot to correct the two mis-spellings you had reminded me of. Please and thanks.
2007-12-30 13:31:46
Yvette
No! I never forget important editing mechanisms, especially about diction in a poem. You didn`t give me the permission, so naturally I thought you intended to invent new words--for better rhythms or displaying strangeness or alienation.
2007-12-30 13:51:04
Sid
Above is a tri-stanza verse with a delicate matrix of rhyming. It depicts the somehow leashed mood towards a person, whose relation to the author is highly cherished. This poem is in response to the addressee’s persuading the poet into regaining enthusiasm for poem writing. The poet has tried to do whatever the best things--he has prinked a lot--to bring in fairness and glory in life, thus to show up his well being. In reality, however, no one is forever blessed with righteousness or favor. Sometimes the poet would not like to see “the Gothic peak”, which symbolizes the high and mighty; he sorts out himself as one of the many “melancholy meek shadowers”, but still keeps pious faith with the addressee.
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