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I overslept this morning.


Because I think my mom will wake me up.


But she didn’t.


And I didn’t set the alarm clocks, either.


Therefor I allowed myself to have a vocation.


But I’m sorry for E.J.


I didn’t told her.


I went to see the chinese doctor at this afternoon.


Then I came to a meeting in evening.


I do it by the end of the day.



















This diary’s sentence not necessarily come from me .


When I have no idea.


I use translation machines.


But I’m try to do the best!!

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lily
you can ask Novy to help you
that will be better!!
2007-07-14 11:28:28
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Novy English is very good.

But she explained I could not accept.


I still told her can correct me.


Thank for ur suggest!!
2007-07-14 23:52:05
Daniel
it`s me again =ˇ=
come and correct=ˇ=
firly u have to know that oversleep is a verb, which means u don`t need a be verb in front of it. so, the first sentence should be &quoti overslept this morning.&quot should use past tense i think...not really sure, better double check with others.
&quotTherefor I allowed myself to a vocation.&quot
u need a verb between to and a, like &quothave&quot.
&quotI’m not told her.&quot grammar mistake again
sohuld be &quoti didn`t tell her.&quot
u don`t really need &quotat&quot uin front of this afternoon in the situation for &quotI went to see the chinese doctor at this afternoon.
&quot
hope these help =ˇ=
2007-07-15 15:40:58
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Sure!

Those suggestion will help me a lot.


Thanks again.
2007-07-15 18:21:16
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