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Today , I learned a lot.


Because Daniel(祥哲) just told me some English grammar.


I really hope my English can improve repidly(迅速).


And if everybody saw those paper have some grammar’s wrong.


Please tell me.


Tanks!!


Eric(逸民) with no key this afternoon.


He and I went to Nanhu high school.


There was a high school matriculation(入學許可) test today


We played cards there.


We had fun.


Then I went to the church.


I’m thanking for god for today.


I have good time.


Willing to glory will go to you.

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Daniel
&quotI really hope that I can progress rapidly English.&quot
it got a better and easier way to say it like &quoti really hope my English can improve repidly.&quot
&quotEric have no key this afternoon.&quot should change &quotwith&quot to &quothave&quot
&quotToday have a high school matriculation tests.&quot hm...sounds a bit strange
it can be changed to &quotThere was a high school matriculation test today.&quot and the next sentence sohuld be we &quotplayed&quot cards there.
these are the big mistakes, but yeah...u`ll improve by writing the diary everyday=ˇ=
it`s just the thing to do with time!
2007-07-15 15:53:10
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I will continue to try it.

It just began.
2007-07-15 18:27:31
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