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Today is Lily’s birthday.

Without Novy said , I forgot.

But I still have a whole lot of good fortune to give you.

Re-starting today ,I will write diary in English every day.

I need a lot of practice to earn my English.

Whether godd or bad , I will try right now.

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lily
thank you!
do your best
i know you can
2007-07-13 10:16:05
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I`m very sorry about that.

Next time I will bear in mind.

And thanks a lot for your encouraged!
2007-07-13 13:08:14
Daniel
got something wrong in ur writing =ˇ=
&quotWithout Novy said , I forgot.&quot
i think u wanted to say &quotif Novy didn`t say it i would gorget it.&quot and need a lot of practices to &quotimprove&quot my English, don`t think earn will do...
and for last sentence it should be &quotno matter how it will be, i`ll try it right now.&quot
hope these correction will help =ˇ=
2007-07-14 23:30:58
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Thank for ur correct.

And I will continue to try it.
2007-07-14 23:46:00
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