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Today is the important day because of I need to check in the

university.

I really want to see something special in Ping-Dong.

In Genesis 12-1~3.

That is the cause why I choose Ping-Dong technology university.

I hope god can use me in this plase make a big gospel’s bombs!

Whish tomorrow will be a wonderfor day.

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大姐= =....
不是&quotplase&quot,是&quotplace&quot
不是whish&quot,是&quotwish&quot
可能打太急了吧
記得要改喔
2007-09-13 23:09:23
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because I wrote this paper at 12 o`clock.
so i was a little tired that moment.
i have a little time don`t wrote english diary.
I belive that will be improve very soon!
2007-09-14 01:47:41
Daniel
for the first sentence it`s &quotan important day&quot not &quotthe important day&quot.
and u don`t need to use &quotbecause of&quot, just &quotbecause&quot is enough.
&quotThis was the reason why i choose ...&quot
not &quotthis is the cause why i chose...&quot
and the last sentence...i`ve told u by MSN
2007-09-13 23:14:41
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TKS
if u have enough time.
maybe u can see my response and check.
2007-09-14 01:48:02
否 是 (若未登入"個人新聞台帳號"則看不到回覆唷!)
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