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I feel lazy reacently.

I will hardly push myself.

I tought about bidder’s SOP.

I want my church to be a amorous church

Because I went to a speech many weeks ago.

Their bider is very good.

I want my church be like that.

So I told to my paster.

He ask me to wroted a SOP for him.

I was so exciting.

We must brighten in this world.

I decided to go to the Pin-Doung university.

It’s really far for me.

And I’m afeard that I can’t study well.

I’ll never behave like before.

I’ll study harder in my university’s life.

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Daniel
&quotI wanna my church is a amorous church.&quot
shouldn`t use wanna here
&quoti want my church to be a amorous church.&quot
&quotBecause I went to a speech many weeks ago.&quot
in this case, i suggest u use presentation instead of speech.
&quotI want my church can be that.&quot just a little bit &quoti want my church be like that.&quot
&quotWe must be a bright in this word.&quot wrong form...should be &quotwe must brighten this world.&quot
&quotAnd I’m afeard about I can’t study well.&quot
wrong spelling and grammar for this sentence.
&quotand i`m affraid that i can`t study well.&quot
for last sentence it`s i`ll study &quotharder&quot not hard.
2007-07-23 23:48:35
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Why I can`t use the wanna here?
2007-07-24 22:18:50
Daniel
coz wanna stand for &quotwant to&quot, so u must have a verb after wanna
2007-07-25 22:29:25
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I see.
2007-07-25 23:38:52
否 是 (若未登入"個人新聞台帳號"則看不到回覆唷!)
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