最近突發奇想
可以把我寫的作文PO上來
好文章就是要跟大家欣賞XD
(不要打我阿^^)
也可以衝一些篇數
所以陸陸續續會PO作文上來啦
也請大家幫忙找出錯誤AND說明
這樣一來也可以讓我的英文進步^^
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這是第一篇喔!
題目是”網路對我們的影響”
The internet is very convinient and all the world is can use. So we go to everywhere, we can use the internet even though in the Starbucks or parks. We can surf the internet everytime. But it also has disadvantages.
The advantage of internet:
1. The internet can helps us find out many knowledges and informations so that we can expand our eyesight and understand the world’s condition.
2. We also can play online games to kill our vacation, free time or if you don’t know what can do.
3. We can listen to music in some paying net like “Kkbox” so we can relax our body.
4. And we can use blog to write down our feeling and thinking, it will smooth our mind and let everyone know your feeling and thinking.
But the internet also have disadvantage.
1. Many violent and sex informations will effect children’s mind if they watch these things. If they touch too much these informations, they possible will to do bad things to people. So we should be careful to supervise children surf internet so that they will not be learning bad things.
2. Maybe they will join the chatroom, so that they touch bad-weather friends. If they touch bad-weather friends a long time, maybe they will do something trouble, too.
The internet is very convenient, but it has many disadvantages. So when we surf internet, we should be very carefully. Especially the children, we can teach them what can do and what can not do by the chance so that they will not get troublesome.
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