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臉　清晰在夢裡
那樣真實


卻　只是幻影


聲音　堅定在夢裡
不容否決


但　不在耳邊


手臂　有力在夢裡
無法逃脫


然　懷裡空虛


已經封箱的行李
是誰開啟？

本該遺忘的人
為何又出現我夢裡？


受傷的心無法愛
恨意將我凌遲
殘骸　已燃成灰燼


放開我手　是你
就別在回憶墳墓中爬起
靜靜安息


還是　不肯放過我的
是自己的回憶

我要檢舉
#惡夢#回憶
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我要回應
蔣恩
埋葬的過去
燒不爛的屍體

就算是殘骸灰燼也擺脫不了愛過你
2007-05-05 00:13:20
版主回應
可是很想擺脫....
2007-05-05 00:42:07
Sally
恩~ 往事不堪回首 (皺眉樣~~)
2007-05-05 17:06:43
版主回應
所以

被自己的回憶擺了一道..
2007-05-05 21:29:53
flyego
文字遊戲-「惡夢」

本想忘記，妳卻不經意提起
相似的愛情軌跡

聽著　聽著
曾盡力隱忍的痛楚
脫序演出

今夜，淚潸潸

愛情從缺　友情猶虛
心底的洞用什麼填
對你的愛意
怎麼忘

三點一刻，雨聲
淚聲

無聲的留聲機
迴音繞耳
如你

絕裂的纏綿

2007-05-05 13:36:11
2007-05-06 05:46:46
版主回應
喔~~

又修改過的呦~~
和我一開始在留言板上看到的不一樣
多了一句~~哈哈~~
2007-05-06 07:35:32
幽默 JT^^
dream is reality
reality is dream
nigtmare of darkness
pain is soundless
2007-06-03 01:34:34
版主回應
pain is soundless
past is like a snake
encircle tightly
if I can`t break away
dream is reality
reality is dream
where is the happness
how could find it
2007-06-03 02:32:08
幽默 JT^^
wow pretty good reply oh^^ just the last 2 lines can be better, the connection didn`t flow that well. But is a surprise to see what you write^^

happiness is in your own hands^^ add oil!
2007-06-04 07:27:08
版主回應
haha...
sorry about that
because my English is not very well...
I didn`t concentrate when I studied in school...
so~~~~~...^^&quot

if happyness is in my own hands
I hope I can disseminate it to everybody around me

it`s glad to see your message..
2007-06-04 14:38:45
幽默 JT^^
your english is not bad^^ at least you can reply me, so that is good already^_<
2007-06-06 01:57:45
版主回應
Thanks for your praise. ^^
I can replay your message because there is a tool named dictionary..haha..


Today..suddenly..
I scare of death....
When I think about this thing,I want to cry..
2007-06-06 02:15:25
幽默 JT^^
don`t think about stupid things too much ok^^

so I guess JT me is helping your english oh^^ dictionary is everyone`s best friend^^
2007-06-08 11:49:37
版主回應
I think that stupid thing because something happened..
so...a little scared...
but there is alright now..^^

yes..I think you can help me to learn English..haha..
2007-06-08 13:40:20
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