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day #81: MURDER MURDER BLOODY MURDER

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who did it? 

see HERE

it's a series, 
I'm pretty darn sure it's YELLOW (: 
make a guess then click. 

surprisingly, the best part of today was english
I always liked dark fiction 8D 

the best? 
definitely Bridget and Pari, 
Bridget for showing that - hey, even if I don't do homework, I'm an awesome writer, so there woodward
she's such a rebel! <3 (: 

awesome story, I didn't know there was so many words to describe pain in the world
that involved a loved one. 

(: hers was about a boy who loved this girl for a long long long time, so he makes a doll, and the doll tells him to kill people,
and eventually, the final straw is when the doll asks him to kill his LOVER, like THE ONE, and then he kills himself in front of her,
the doll eventually wins though
she kills the girl
LOL sadface much. 

Pari's.
was
a
classic.
loved it (: 

it was like E(TUMV( *U@*(Y#@*&%378y()I)_ so good, 
I want a copy of it so I can tell the whole world about it. 

so, he's a psychotic 14 year old who kills his entire family.
how he kills his brother: 

muffles his brother with a pillow,
and then rams a knife through the head 
connects wires to his phone and he starts playing snake
apparently he read somewhere that you could 'control dreams like this'

then he starts sending rude and vulgar texts messages to his 7 year old brother's childhood crush (: 

then he stops his 'bullying'

he calls it a 'prank' 
LOL 

then he buries his 7 year old brother under his parent's bed
(: 

he kills his parents eventually
(Ithink) by bombing up the room (magnetic field in the attic)

8D 

then he hates the judging look from the paramedic - 
so he rams a pencil through the neck, comes out through the collarbone
rams a pencil through the brains
enjoying every thrust, 
comes out everywheree. 

wheee.



mhm like that (: 

so then, 
he goes into an asylum, 
of course.

his last sentence
"I like it better here 
now that these padded walls have blood on them"

(: 





everyone please ask Pari for his story. 





well, here's mine,
it's nothing to Pari's 
but yea,


The murderer sneaked up behind the unsuspecting boy with an axe in one hand. His eyes, bloodshot and vicious, resembling a madman’s. Then, with a smile, he leaped and the axe plunged into the boy’s back. The child struggled and screamed, his body flying across the room. The murderer grinned cynically as the boy flailed around. As the murderer awaited the boy’s death, he stared blankly into the boy’s eyes..

Then, the murderer started to chop him up, limb by limb.

I shivered and reached for the air conditioner and TV remote at the same time. Switching the TV off, I glanced at the clock — the hands pointed to the big one. Next to me, Leah was already fast asleep. We had worked on our science project longer expected and had already dozed off an hour into the movie.

Outside, a shroud of silence enveloped the entire building. Drip, drip, drip — the sounds of the leaking water dispenser could be heard. Most of my classmates had gone back to spend the summer with their parents, which explained the unusual silence.

I shook Leah’s shoulders and as she awoke, she gave me an apologetic look as I started for my own room, down the hallway.

Right outside my room, I stopped by the water dispenser to have a drink, and that’s when I noticedthe puddles of water. I shook my head and walked into my room, landing on my bed face first.

I couldn’t sleep as insomnia trailed behind my thoughts of the day. I was about to switch on the night-light when I stopped. In the silence, I heard the light footsteps of someone walking down the hallway.

I blinked out the sleep in my eyes. It was summer and everybody on our floor left for the summer holidays except for Leah — and I knew Leah was sound asleep in her room.

Wild possibilities started to race around my head. The footsteps continued. I counted, patiently awaiting them to stop. Whoever it was had already paced up and down the hallway 12 times.

Drip, drip, drip, the sound of water (or was it water?) dripping deafened everything else, even the loud drum that was beating in my heart.

Soft thumps could be heard as those dreaded feet continued to pace down the hallway. Meanwhile, my heart was thinking, hoping. Ms. Ling the cafeteria lady? No, she lived downtown and leaves after 8. Mr. Thompson, the guard? He should be standing at the front gates.

My heart, thunderous and loud, sounded in my ears… the footsteps were walking in my direction now!

And then, the footsteps stopped right in front of my door.

By now, my heart was thumping so hard that I thought for sure that it was going to beat itself out.

Drip, drip, drip, the dreaded droplets trickled into my ears.

The footsteps started up again, I couldn’t take it anymore. I decided to make a run for it. A run for Leah’s room. I decided to wait until the footsteps halted before Bolting to Leah’s room.

Silence came, like a sudden hefting of a knife.

I drew in a gasp and counted to three. At the end of three second, I was already soaring out of my covers and heading towards the door.

I threw it open and ran straight down the hallway to Leah’s room. I raised my hands to pound my fists on the door when I abruptly stopped.

The door was opened.

I heard dripping everywhere. Every corner, every wall, every single piece of particle of matter was screaming out that horrifying dripping sound.

I frantically scanned the room and stopped dead in my tracks.

There, in front of me, was Leah’s body, on the floor, chopped into odd shapes and chunks.

My screams echoed in my head, reverberating through my thoughts. Thoughts of the murderer ran though my mind. And then, in midst of all this mess of thoughts, a sudden thought silenced all of them. I forgot to close the door.

My body turned instinctively to escape from here, when I felt a hand on my shoulder. Looking sideways, all I saw was five long, red nails.

Drip, drip, drip.  The sound reached my ears like heavy metal music blaring through speakers.

The unsheathing of a knife cut through the air and suddenly and a foreign sharp object entered my back. I gasped in pain and fell to the ground.

I managed to turn my head around. The figure I saw had empty eye sockets, pale pink, chapped lips and a cold, pale white body.

My body shook with such thundering force. I was so scared that when I shrilled, no sound exited my mouth. It was as if she took my breath away,

 

Then the whole world blacked out.

 

Drip, drip, drip went the water

Drip, drip, drip went my blood, creating a lake of blood underneath me.


I feel so bad


after like, reading everyone else's. 










anyways, 

we had chinese first though

the movie, very interesting,

though I doubt a foot massage is THAT good. 


or is it the event that comes AFTER that make them want him to come into their rooms.

IDK.


studyhall: okay productive,

stalking ssis people on facebook (: 


lunch:


I like my habitat group! (: 

I can tell that I am going to be uber close to loads of people after this trip.

yayy 8D 


math:

was listening the whole time

only to realize

I am more effective when christy teaches me 1-on-1

THANK YOU CHRISTY! (: 








maureeeen. 








p.s: the new weapon - 




(: 







TT I am so getting nightmares tonight sadface.

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小青
hahash i doubt that i taught u anything good :p hopefully u get it hahas!

finally i love long posts!
2010-01-30 14:21:09
版主回應
no no you did! (:

now I can do hw

8D
2010-01-30 23:34:43
frances
lol i love the gummy bears. soo cute XDDDD
your story was really good, trust me :D
2010-01-30 22:33:27
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(: thanks frances.

I DIDN'T GET TO READ YOURS
POST YOURS ONLINE 8D

I want pari's story,
well
I want to SHARE his story with the whole wide world

<3
2010-01-30 23:35:32
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