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跟蹤老師的日子

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一月二十一日的聚會裡,同學們拼命把頭髮搔短了,想要記得一兩個好老師,「這個說那個抗戰不努力、那個說這個剿匪不用心」,好像沒什麼共識。不過
Yvette想幫陳毓芳老師說句話。

大四那一年,系上來了兩位不食人間煙火的美女教我們英文作文。公費生那一組的超級美女是王言梅老師,(「喂!Yvette,我們的記憶力哪有那麼壞?!」)自費生那一組是陳毓芳老師。(我們當然記得她!)對於基礎不好、三年來亂參加社團、耽誤學業、超級打混的Yvette來說,陳老師既自由又嚴謹的訓練是最好的教學。(這種過程,Sidney, Ernest, Daisy, Carol, Joyce, Anita, Margaret, Victor, Sophia. Fanny......和Agnes妳們原本底子就穩的同學是不會懂的!)

我們從題目開始練習起。那時候Yvette自作聰明想寫 “Pollution,” 以為很好發揮,卻是惡夢的開始!(到現在看到這個字還是不斷的列出supporting details!) 我們先畫mind chart, 用free association連結所有可能資料,然後過濾不要的、無法發展出敘述的細節,接著,打outline, 寫thesis statements, topic narrowed down, main idea #1, main idea #2, main idea#3, conclusion, transitional statements!一次一個練習:課堂討論、課堂交換批改peer editing, 帶回家revise…聽起來是很八股的訓練,可是就像我每次都用羅素的 “What I Have Lived For” 當例子一樣,將我的手指頭做了最好的利用。往後寫作,特別是寫說明文時,長度可以做最好的掌控。我記得大四的七舍日子裡,我都會呆呆拿著臉盆洗衣服,腦子不曾閒著,都是打叉不用的supporting details。

毓芳老師習慣打兩個分數,一個是content/structure, 一個是diction/grammar/documentation. (我到現在也都還這麼打分數!) 當時的Yvette很自作多情的想:老師一定是怕傷害我們這些鄉下來的大朋友,多給一點甜頭嚐嚐。我好像右邊的分數都比較高,可是我的diction 和 grammar 最弱!(也許我記錯了!)

因為毓芳老師的優雅,讓我們變得很多事!她下課憑欄遠眺的時候,我們覺得她的眼神有一股淡淡的憂愁。有一天,她挽著她的中型提包(是LV包嗎?好像哦!那時候當然不知道什麼叫LV包啦!)騎著小摩托車回員林,我們就偷偷去跟蹤…(跟丟了!)

那段跟蹤老師的日子,真的好美哦!

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附: 羅素的經典短文

What I Have Lived For
from:
The Prologue to Bertrand Russell’s Autobiography

Three passions, simple but overwhelmingly strong, have governed my life: the longing for love, the search for knowledge, and unbearable pity for the suffering of mankind. These passions, like great winds, have blown me hither and thither, in a wayward course, over a great ocean of anguish, reaching to the very verge of despair.
I have sought love, first, because it brings ecstasy - ecstasy so great that I would often have sacrificed all the rest of life for a few hours of this joy. I have sought it, next, because it relieves loneliness--that terrible loneliness in which one shivering consciousness looks over the rim of the world into the cold unfathomable lifeless abyss. I have sought it finally, because in the union of love I have seen, in a mystic miniature, the prefiguring vision of the heaven that saints and poets have imagined. This is what I sought, and though it might seem too good for human life, this is what--at last--I have found.

With equal passion I have sought knowledge. I have wished to understand the hearts of men. I have wished to know why the stars shine. And I have tried to apprehend the Pythagorean power by which number holds sway above the flux. A little of this, but not much, I have achieved.

Love and knowledge, so far as they were possible, led upward toward the heavens. But always pity brought me back to earth. Echoes of cries of pain reverberate in my heart. Children in famine, victims tortured by oppressors, helpless old people a burden to their sons, and the whole world of loneliness, poverty, and pain make a mockery of what human life should be. I long to alleviate this evil, but I cannot, and I too suffer.

This has been my life. I have found it worth living, and would gladly live it again if the chance were offered me.



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Bertrand Russell (1872-1970) won the Nobel prize for literature for his History of Western Philosophy and was the co-author of Principia Mathematica.

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Yvette
言梅老師是我們的導師,也是Janet畢旅的一週室友,畢業後還來參加過Janet的婚禮和我們的小聚會!而且還帶Janet去聽李立群說相聲呢!老師好偏心哦!

(我還是覺得她比較像小姐姐!是可愛型的美女!喜歡的鞋還會同款買多雙!真是典型的A型人!布秋說她當年在東海轉系而和師丈交往時,很多男生都氣得牙癢癢的!紛紛說那個字!)

林肯大郡坍塌一年後,有一次颱風來襲,記者去採訪當地居民,我覺得受訪者就是言梅老師!只是鏡頭閃得太快,雖然聲音很像,也沒有再看到重播!

毓芳老師好像已經離開台科大,
言梅老師現在不知道在哪個學校?
2007-01-25 01:35:41
珍妮特
親愛的小主人,我真的不只是佩服你,簡直還有點怕你了,畢旅時我真的和王老師當了一週的室友嗎?我真的一點都想不起來耶。慘了,不知道哪天告訴你什麼不可為人知的小秘密,講完我忘了,你還一清二楚的。
2007-01-25 20:40:29
版主回應
這樣說我也就不確定了!
言梅老師不是和你同寢室嗎? 這種無關情緒的事,
三十八歲以前的Yvette不會寫在日記裡,
所以也無從查證了!

妳放心:妳從沒有不可告人的秘密!
2007-03-11 14:29:39
Yvette 查到了!
言梅師還在護理技術學院
毓芳師還在台科大,剛剛去她的個人網頁留了言,希望她會看到!
http://homepage.ntust.edu.tw/yfchen/
2007-01-25 23:16:45
butcher
大學四年,最難忘的當然屬陳梅英老師了,但是王言梅老師及陳毓芳老師也惠我良多,如果說二十多年的教學生涯,學生對我能有一絲感念,大概就是複製了他們對我影響的一切,在這裡我要大聲說〝謝謝你們〞
yvette你也太神奇了!我才去吃個飯,你已經又寫一堆了,還好,這個月我的三百篇作文剛改完!我還有點時間可以上來晃晃!
2007-01-27 13:28:15
版主回應
說到改作文, 剛剛讀到一首學生寫的詩:

Bird can sing, people can sex.
Tree is less, sing more.
Life is short, sex more.

雖然文法錯一堆,可真是他X的有道理!

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我哪有寫一堆?!不就一條留言!

陳梅英老師真的很棒,還是幫我命名的師父!

可是除了發音課的表演,(必須打破玻璃的那一個mini-play)我不太有印象!一定是我沒唸好她教的課!

曾經寄了幾年的卡片給她,然後就沒連絡了....不如布秋老大寫一則來,我們刊到正文讓同學留言!
2007-03-11 14:30:29
Butcher
記得一年級時唸KK音標,我的音都亂發,因為我國中至高中都是學萬國音標,陳老師為了糾正我的發音,常常站在我前面一個音,一個音的教我重複的作.到現在我教學生發音時,我都會想起她的耐心
Yvette同學,下學期我也想把電腦用到教學中,我應從何處入手.不用講太深,我的電腦水準只在出考卷的水準. 為了打這篇中文,我已經花了快一小時了,所以我看到你能打那麼多,實在很羨慕,其時其它的同學可能也想知道電腦如何在教學上的應用.
我家電腦壞了.我到學校才能用到電腦.新電腦等回台灣再買.
2007-01-29 10:16:58
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