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加油!!!!(涙)

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JS也是念斗六的學校畢業的喔
哪你知道”二吉軒”
很有名的早餐兼宵夜

i m here, you wanted advice well I will try to do my best on it, hope you dont feel bad after reading it.

This piece has some good elements but overall is not exciting. Sorry thats how I am very stright foward, good is good bad is bad I dont want to lie to anybody. Than you will not get any better at your artwork. Following I like to ask you some questions, you think about it and answer me back.

1. What is this piece about? if is about flying sorry I don’t see that or feel that.

2. what are you trying to show in the piece? What is your thought going into it?

3. what is that tall human doing? the pose dont express anything

4. why is the back arm and hand look so big? if you trying to push the drawing, you have to understand the real thing before you can push it.

5. what is the mood you trying to express in it? the black background kill your piece, the little characters, the cats or whatever they are, I don’t even know what is it, is totally lost in the black.

Also your hands are so off, the one holding the card is not a good drawing of a hand, and the back hand is weird, it dont look right. you need to understand what you are drawing, dont just draw, lines have to show the form, it has to show what is the subject you are drawing, also need to look correct to the eye.

Also is not about change your colors the piece will look better, there is too many mistake inside the piece. Next time when you are drawing really think of what you are drawing, get information or pictures on how things look before you start drawing, make sure you study it and understand it, than you can create it.

I wrote a piece recently about drawing, you should take a look, maybe it will help you.
hope my comments don’t hurt your feeling.

anyways keep drawing 加油!

樓上的人好認真地下了comment!

嗯
看看別人的建議比較容易進步

新聞台沒有英文單字辨識功能嗎 = =

我好喜歡這張圖的感覺 ^^

樓上的comment太嚴肅了...(不禁抱屈)創作是這麼自由的事，不論是文章也好，圖片也好，尤其是在這種個人新聞台或是blog，是個人的發洩空間...若還得把創作的東西說個明白，那麼連恣意的感覺都失去了。

我個人很喜歡這張圖，光暈的色彩搭配、人物和小動物的構圖，有點像夜晚的魔術派對...那又怎樣？每個人的解讀都不一樣，何必非得說出個所以然，來封鎖欣賞者的想像空間？

我是在斗六唸書
有一次和同學回去斗六看老師
還特別跑去哪吃東西
最懷念他的”筍包”了

this is to 飲冰室作品集 up top, I agree what you say but today the person did the piece ask me for advice, I think I need to give her something she can understand and learn. All I am trying to do is helping people get better, yes creative should be fun and have freedom. But the artwork should show confidence and excitement too. I never like to comment on people’s artwork, unless they ask me to.

this is for JS
what I mean by pushing the drawing is not 透視感, it means if you want to make the hand bigger than you have to understand how hand looks like, if you want to push the body very big. You have to understand how body is and where you can make it bigger and smaller, so it still look right.

also now u know when you drawing think of each element you want to put into your drawing, how can you make that piece look good. Always do a few rough drawing to get your idea down, dont just draw it. This way you can see how many ways u can make one finally drawing...ok thats about all^^

えぇと．．．以我一個局外人來看，我是覺得JT說的也沒錯，有時會不了解妳的圖意，不過我想這是每個人對圖從不同角度的見解，畢竟我們不是作圖者，又如何能干涉作圖者的作畫自由呢?
我想JT的意思是建議台長在作畫前要先”思考”吧!思考這張圖真正想要表達的是什麼，以及再下一點工夫在技巧上(我自己猜的)。
而JT說的the black background，我第一次看也是black，但是經台長一說，我把螢幕換個度，就變成deep green了耶!!!難怪難怪…
不過我很喜歡圖的配色，有點像妳投版型那張的感覺，整體深綠的配色讓我覺得很舒服，是我從來不會想過要用到的配色方式呢!這張給我的感覺真的就像飲冰室作品集所說的有種夜晚的魔術派對的感覺呢!
總之，加油!!

對對對
還有熱麻糬跟牛肉麵
還有一家超好吃的素食便當
她們的便當真的很大又便宜
而且老闆夫婦人都好好喔
還有一間在廟口的豆漿(應該沒記錯^^a)
也好好喝喔
剛剛突然發現
好像只有我ㄧ個人在說吃的
哈哈哈(>///<)

有可能我記錯了
印象中是在廟附近說
因為每次都是同學帶我去吃的ㄚ
說到吃 口水都快流出來了
前一陣子
有回學校去開同學會
走有很多地方
想起了很多事情
也覺得斗六也變好多喔