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2009/04/23

 

今天

發了期中考的考卷

真的挺難過的..

 

當初考了兩篇

一篇是看影片的

另一個題目是Last weekend

因為白吃看錯時間

以為時間還很長...

結果上週末那篇只寫了一段=__=

成績當然不會好到哪裡去

 

只得了 50分

漫難過的…

 

畢竟是自己沒寫完

有人更慘 連寫都沒寫

記得那時候要交卷的時候

他還問我那篇要不要寫

今天好像被老師罵的很慘 哀..

 

我的鳥文章如下 (老師改過的)

★ 老師評語:結構不錯

A Show

 

　　The film is about the little girl singing the song. It looks like her own concert. She is very young, only sixteen years old. In this film, she wears a black dress and sings I Will Survive.

　　The girl uses different singing skills. First, the song starts and she sings slowly with a low voice.Second, she sings loudly with a very powerful voice.Then, she begings to dance and the pltch is very high. Afeter the girl sings, the audience is surprised and they clap hands.

　　This show is very great. To my surprise, the girl is only sixteen years old but she sings very well.

 

 

紅色字是老師修改的

突然覺得我的文章好短= __=

期末考的應該更難 ..

該認真努力了!!!!

 

 

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