這篇Essay
是我之前的作業
每個禮拜都得寫很多作文
一個Essay是有很多技巧的
想要好好答你的閱讀測驗
想要容易找出那些答案的話
你最好知道那些技巧在那裡
四技有考過..一大題
(我忘了是不是我的跨考英文)
是要給你看一段文章
然後選出一個合適的Topic
(我最討厭這種了)
看了下面的解說
應該會比較容易作答吧
Name: Jonathan
Date: 11/15/06
A memorable trip to Taiwan
首段叫Introductory Paragraph(介紹的段落)
首段裡一定會藏有2個部份,
一個叫抓手(Grabber)用來吸引你的注意的,
(這點就是為什麼補習班老師都說,重點在首段!)
一個叫論題敘述(Thesis Statement),
這一句是整個文章跟著它跑的,
通常這一句都是在首段
[第一句]或[最後一句]
我下面的首段是放在最後一句!
而文章的題目就是跟著這句比較關連
我的那句跟我的題目是有相關的!
Everyone must have some travel experience, so do I. Why will you like traveling? And how’s your feeling at the end of the travel? It’s so busy and troublesome before you go, but after you traveled, you will find something else that is worthier than the trouble things you did before. Do you know what that is? It is “Memory”. [Long time ago, I also had a memorable trip, I went to Taiwan to visit my mom.]
中間的段落,都叫做Body Paragraph(身體段落)
中間的段落,藏著的是Topic sentence
每一段的文章都是跟著TS在跑的
你可以找到它,在每個BP的
[第一句]或[第二句]
我的這一段是用在第一句
(句點才是一個完整句子)
[About nine years ago, it was my first time to go abroad to Taiwan.] I was so excited to take a plane, although I was afraid in the plane. The view in the sky is really amazing. I thought if I were a bird, I think the feeling would be like that, free. The first thing I did when I arrived was call my mom who had the same voice I knew before. After then I went to the hotel to find her. I really missed my mom so much because I hadn’t seen her for three years. I stayed in Taiwan for two months, ate so much food that I had never eaten, and went to a lot of places and took some pictures, it was so funny. I played a lot and stayed with my mom before I came back to Taiwan. I deeply remembered that day I left. When I woke up at seven, my mom had already gone to work. When I arrived to the airport I also called my mom again to say goodbye. In this trip, I had two totally different emotions, I was happy to saw my mom at the beginning and so sad when I left.
最段一段叫Conclusion Paragraph(結論段落)
最後一段通常都是呼應第一段的
如果你第一段找不到你要的答案
不妨試試看找最後一段!
Everyone must have an experience to have a memorable trip. You will make friends and have a lot of common memories; it is full of happiness and sad emotions. Every trip has different feeling. If you don’t forget it, it will become your treasure in the future!
不太難找出來的..
宛瑜這PO又是為你這考生PO的
好好記得Thesis Statement,Topic Sentence在那!
超好記的吧?看一眼就可以了
這篇Essay算寫最好的囧
這篇的重點是用clause寫Essay
還是有一點點不好的地方
我沒有再給她改過了@@
這篇也滿簡單的..練練閱讀吧!
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