我的作文拿到超高分 九十五欸 天阿阿阿阿阿阿
我不敢相信！！！
老師還寫ｗｏｎｄｅｒｆｕｌ
雖然看小說的考試成績 這兩次可能都會ｆａｉｌ
可是我作文目前都是８９左右 好開心喔
校長說他看我入學考作文 一看就知道不是ｎａｔｉｖｅ ｅｎｇｌｉｓｈ ｓｐｅａｋｅｒ
真希望他看看我的這篇文章；目
努力都是有代價的， 花了快５小時 平均一小時拿１９分 酷
２０２看到會覺得裡面有好多我們高一背的東西
不要覺得被那些單字很機 他們真的很有用哦～～：）
語資雖然比別人辛苦 可是收穫一定會很多很多！！
ｇｏ ｂａｂｅｓ
Though I look little and weak, taking care of 3 children shows I’m strong on the inside. My parents divorced when I was fourteen. Dad worked in a different city and seldom came back; Mom no longer lived with us. A cook and a driver were hired and I was the one to look after my brother and sisters. It was a harsh job. My brother and sisters had some bad habits. They didn’t sleep on time, they didn’t always finish their homework and plus they had many personal hygiene problems. The most serious problem was that my brother was way naughty and selfish. However, my sisters, couldn’t endure him, being impatient. They treated him badlly. They kept argueing day after day. Our home was like a battleground. I’ve regarded scolding as the only way to prevent them from making mistakes so I managed to be a stiff person that isn’t me. Yet, I soon found it helpless. It didn’t produce a positive result and our relationship got worse. My brother even started to resist me. I was fully frustrated. ”I spared no efforts but I got nothing,” I thought to myself. Nevertheless, I began to ask experienced people for advice and try many new ways as well. Presently, it finally dawned on me that listening and paying love are the best policies. Now, we live together so well that they all think me of their best firend. Despite it has been a tough time for me, I learned a big lesson which greatly influenced my concept. Always truely understand others’ need before you do something for them.
下禮拜就要去ｃｈｉｎａ ｔｒｉｐ了
好酷
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