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我為了要完成我神聖的literature作業

只是一封信就花了兩小時= =

這是第一個功課我想給老師好印象..

我居然心甘情願少看了星光半個多小時的時間

我一定是瘋了

哪個英文達人看到的話 幫我檢查一下有沒有錯哦

Angel Juan
No.200 Hollywood Villa
Cheduen town
Songjiang District, Shanghai

SCIS-Pudong Campus
NO.800 Xiuyan Road
Pudong Shanghai 201315

Dear Mrs. Miles,

Nice to meet you! I am a new student who was born to have a curious and outgoing personality from Taiwan. I’m fond of singing. I’ve taken part in many singing contest, being invited to perform on stages at my previous school. I feel like rescuing our society, which is getting cold and detached gradually. Though I’ve got a great ideal, never did possible methods appear in my brain. Besides, I have a big family containing 8 people who I love deeply and lots of friends who care about me a lot. I cherish the intimacies with them and always thank God for what I own.

This is my first year in SCIS and the first year in a school teaching without first language as well. Though I did an outstanding job on English in Taiwan, learning everything in a foreign language is a huge challenge. Either understanding all the content what teachers are teaching or following the speed of reading in class stresses me. Looking words up in a dictionary for tomorrow’s course even take me more than one hour per day. However, on account of the dream of being an English teacher, having the opportunity to study in SCIS is really precious to me. I’ll keep doing my best in order to reach the goal.

Thank you for reading my letter. Hope you can know me better through it. It’s glad to take American and British Literature. I’m looking forward to achieve a good education from you.

Sincerely yours,




Angel Juan



現在有點後悔我當初沒有早點來讀美國學校

十一年級的成績最重要

偏偏我在十一年級才來

economics is driving me insane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




為什麼我不是外國人:(






我要去看星光了 留言我明天回

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besmiling
我沒有很認真看啦
可是我覺得寫的很好
2007-08-24 23:35:56
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真的假的阿

噢噢噢 辛苦是有代價的

可是在外國人眼裡這樣應該就普普通通吧
2007-08-25 13:13:26
肉丸
我也有這種哀怨:(
我真稀我天生是個外國人,
就算沒有至少是個abc也不錯阿!
2007-08-24 23:36:52
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唉唉 可是其實中文比英文難欸

我十六歲才到國外這樣也算ABC嗎..
2007-08-25 13:14:21
bubble
不錯ㄚ 有程度的感覺XD
2007-08-25 10:39:05
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程度??

那都是字典的功勞XP
2007-08-25 13:16:50
哈哈
你錯了
外國人作文不一定寫的好
2007-08-25 21:03:48
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對齁!

外國人文法好像都不太好的樣子

可是校長跟我說他看我之前入學考的作文

他說一看就知道我不是外國人= =
2007-08-25 21:11:08
因為你寫的比外國人好
2007-08-27 10:05:53
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謝謝你讚美我

可是請去掉後面那句

謝謝
2007-08-31 20:23:38
是 (若未登入"個人新聞台帳號"則看不到回覆唷!)
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