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A Token Of Appreciation

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不知道為什么
我很想放出這篇小說~

這是我第一次寫的小說
第一次比就比全馬的比賽
全校只有我一個人用英文寫的~

>.<”

你知道嗎?
報名那天時有很多人參加~
可是
交上稿的人不如報名人數那么多

原因就是
那個條件

全部人聽老師講關于比賽的其中一個terms and conditions后就發呆
那就是
稿要在5天以內打完...

哇靠!
挑戰性未免太高了吧~

字數是要在1000字以內
可以用馬來文或者英文

還要什么pelajar yang harmony當作latar/setting
意思差不多是很和諧的學生

學生名字我用朋友的名字
有很多種族的名字
馬來人,華人,印度人等

主題還是固定了的
那就是
thank you teachers!(英文)
terima kasih cikgu!(馬來文)

沒想到我竟然能打完!
就交上去咯~
我覺得我的theme比較很friendship

我還在里面做出詩
每行的開頭是
T,H,A,N,K,Y,O,U,T,E,A,C,H,E,R,S
第一次寫的詩
我覺得還OK。。。

雖然我覺得我這次打的不是很好
可是老師還講我寫的不錯

(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……

一邊想一邊打出來的
沒有寫在稿紙后才打

題目:A Token Of Appreciation


The atmosphere of the meeting room was a little tense . The chairman of the English Society , Lee Sean , together with the members of English Society , still did not have a decision after two hours of brainstorming .
Only one word can describe everybody’s feeling , ‘ frustrated ’ .

“ What shall we present for this year’s Teachers Day ? Raise your hand if you choose drama . ” Sean said .

I , the odd bird , was the only one who did not choose drama . Out of the blue , Sean stared at me , just like a starving eagle spotted its prey .

“ What’s your brilliant idea , Vincent ? ” I saw red when he teased me twice .

“ Hmm… Hmm… ” I wrinkled my forehead , I squeezed my brain but I got nothing . I hoped my bosom friend , Chin Boon can give me a hint .

“ Put your thinking cap on . Time and tide wait for no man . ” Sean taunted .

“ And woman . ” Eileen interrupted . She gets such a thrill from insulting me .

Just because sometimes I was a little bit sissy . Ha…
Ha… Ha… So funny , nope .

“ Pss… Poem…” Chin Boon whispered to me .

“ Poem recital ! ” I shouted .

“ Do you think that you are a Poet Laureate ? ” Intan taunted .

Something bad can happen if you do not look before you leap .

“ Do you know why we work so hard for the Teachers Day ? To be the winner of the highlight of the Teachers Day , the Talent Show . And the most important thing is to be the spotlight . We must be the best and beat the rest . ” Sean said .

Everybody saw eye to eye with Sean , except me .

“ What ! I think we should thanks our teachers on that day , not to be a winner ! They did many things for us , they sacrificed their time to teach us and we passed PMR with flying colours . ” I protested .

“ If their job is to teach us , so , our job is to get straight A’s . ” Sean said. “ This is our script titled ‘ Anna and the King 2 ’ . Please remember this script in a week . ” Sean mentioned it as he was drumming his fingers on the table .
Sean lost his mind . The Teachers Day was just around the corner . Almost everyone followed his crazy demand without any protest because all of them were yes-men , except me .
* * * * * * * * * * *

“ How was the rehearsal ? ” Prabu , the prefect asked .

“ ‘ Great ’ ! I felt sick when rehearsing with his la-di-da friends . He’s going banana… ” I was exhausted when I criticized that VIP , very idiot person . “ I play a monk in this drama , so humiliated . ”

“ Isn’t Sean your best friend ? ” Prabu asked .

I was speechless because that was history . Things may change , people also change .

“ I heard that the drama is ‘ Anna and the King 2 ’ . Don’t you think that it is a little weird because present a romantic drama on the Teachers Day ? Do you think… ” Prabu asked me a series of quick-fire questions .

“ I have a game plan , pss… ” I whispered .

“ Whoa ! ” Prabu was surprised . “ Are you sure you want to do this ? Never trouble trouble till trouble troubles you .”

“ As sure as eggs are eggs , and this is the only way to solve this matter . ” I answered .
* * * * * * * * * * *

“ All participants of the Talent Show please assemble at Ibnu Sina Hall , now . ”

“ Didn’t you hear an announcement just now ! Quick ! Stop dilly-dallying ! ” Maisara shouted as she adjusted her tiara .

“ It’s our red-letter day ! ” Sean shouted .

The la-di-da gang walked into the hall with proud and strut , pretended not to recognize anyone , followed by Chin Boon and me , who were the members of the least popular gang .

“ What’s yer group ? ” Madam Lee asked .

“ Ingleses Societe . ” Eileen replied .

“ Pardon ? ” Madam Lee questioned .

“ English Society , in French . ” Eileen answered .

“ Hmm… Poem recital . ” Madam Lee said as she adjusted her glasses .

“ What ! That impossible ! Must be something goes awry ! ” Eileen cried . “ Bad is never good until worse happens . ”

The members of the la-di-da group were throwing a fit because someone changed the drama into poem recital .

“ All participants , please gather on the stage . ” Madam Lee said .

“ That even worse ! ” Maisara cried . “ Vincent betrays us ! ”
* * * * * * * * * * *
“ Poem recital , Oon Vincent from 4 Sapphire . ” The master of ceremony said .

When I were on the stage , I hoped against hope that I won’t tongue-tied because this was the first time I on this stage .

There were many people , including the principal of Sekolah Menengah Kebangsaan Jitra and teachers . I started to recite a poem titled ‘ Thank You Teachers ’ .

“ Till… till… ” I was too nervous , so , I took a deep breath and tried again .

Till the midnight ,
He or she is still awake .
All their students are in the land of Nod .
Noble teachers ,
Keep their promise to teach their students to be the best .

Youngsters , you must
Obey your teachers .
U must study well

To achieve a great success .
Even though teachers must sacrifice themselves , but it is
A deal . A deal among teachers and students .
Care about your teachers , always . Because they never let us
Hang out to dry when we most need their help .
Ennoble teachers ,
Racing with the time to teach us everything , anything they know .
So , THANK YOU TEACHERS !

The performance , which was all blood and thunder , left the audience greatly moved .

“ That ‘ Cinderella ’ is stealing our spotlight ! ” Maisara cried .

“ But , I think he’s right . We owed teachers a lot . We must thank them . ” Sean said .

“ Are you lost your mind ! You’re not ‘ you ’ again , we won’t be a loser’s friend . Hmm ! ” Eileen insisted .

Both Maisara and Eileen left Sean alone in a school corridor nearby . He was so lonely and nobody was there . He was ashamed with all his doings . He thought that he should turn over a new leaf .

“ I cannot abandoned my brother alone , right ? ”

“ Brother ? After what I did to you for two years ? Do I deserve a second chance ? ” Sean asked me .

“ It is never too late to repent . ” I replied .

Sean eyes filled with tears , sincere tears . We became friends again . Since that day , he became the ‘ old Sean ’ again , a friendly Sean .
* * * * * * * * * * *

Unfortunately , I did not win the Talent Show . But , I did it , to study well and achieve such a great success as a best gift for our teachers .

Really , thank you teachers .

(999字)


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要考PMR了,所以這會是我打的最后一篇~
10月17號左右才會update新聞臺~
下個星期要攻歷史!

掰掰~

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Rosita
哇哇哇
加油喔!!
英文詩耶,不簡單!!!
要幫你推+鼓啦!!
小子,你華/英文都很好耶!!
2008-09-27 00:37:00
版主回應
thx:)
可是,我的開頭就有一點錯誤了~不能改了~很大的錯誤~
誰看到就跟我講~
我就講他厲害~
2008-09-27 10:49:47
福建魷魚
寫得真好~真情流露,還把自己形容成sissy。^^
希望你得獎!
2008-09-27 18:46:43
版主回應
老實說,我是有點sissy啦~
謝謝;)
2008-09-27 21:33:33
~藍雲若雨~
寫得不錯ㄟ

啪啪啪 !拍手~

考試~加油哦!
2008-09-27 21:31:11
版主回應
謝謝:)
考試我會加油的!
2008-09-27 21:35:05
洛凝
很久没用英文了,除了那些网络的指令外。差不多都生锈了,所以看你这篇文章有点吃力。
不过,你还把情节铺排,还以thank you teachers来写诗,非常用心。我觉得你的老师看了一定很感动吧。
你有诗人的潜质,加油咯。
2008-09-28 03:23:31
版主回應
thanks^^
那個詩我用1小時多的時間來寫~那是時間真的不夠用了~小說題目我在學校(交稿那天)才想出來~‘時間’不夠用~
2008-09-28 09:39:50
Yi Mei
加油囉~~祝考試順利...
2008-09-28 11:03:22
版主回應
謝謝^^
2008-09-28 11:38:18
大校長
你很棒的

一定可以得名的

加油加油喔
2008-09-28 11:17:20
版主回應
我覺得很難得獎~
因為這是全國比賽,我比的是13歲到17歲左右的比賽~
有沒有得獎都無所謂,只是要得到經驗就可以了~
2008-09-28 11:40:58
。布瓜。
加油~大家都對你有信心
沒問題的啦
別緊張
這將會是你的經驗累積
我會祝福你^^
2008-09-28 22:04:25
版主回應
^^耶!
2008-09-29 09:34:13
小煩
加油喔~~
2008-09-29 07:19:37
版主回應
:)
2008-09-29 09:35:42
微笑,
好厲害阿=口=

加油加油,你一定可以得獎的拉>ˇ<
要對自己有信心
2008-09-29 10:45:36
版主回應
謝謝夸獎^^
2008-09-29 12:53:43
阿 Han
厲害.厲害.加油.^0^.
2008-09-29 20:21:49
版主回應
thx;)
2008-09-29 20:49:59
 ♥ 芽芽&q
ㄡ我都看不懂
你好厲害歐=))
good!!
2008-10-01 12:52:53
版主回應
thanks;)
2008-10-01 19:20:31
明~~~慧
美女~~跟妳說晚安ㄡ^_^!!

哇~~寫的好棒啊 讚^^
2008-10-01 23:35:24
版主回應
(^_^)
2008-10-02 10:12:19
springtree
回訪!沒想到新朋友從遙遠地方來喔,長江後浪推前浪,文筆真好呢!
2008-10-04 20:30:24
版主回應
thanks;)
2008-10-04 20:40:56
賣友網~
文章寫得不錯唷.謝謝你分享好文章!

有空也來我站,玩玩奴隸買賣啦^^

http://www.alwaysfamily.us/
2008-10-20 10:35:02
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